Sunday, June 7, 2009

Haiku - In The Deep, Dark Cave

 
In the deep, dark cave,
There isn't light that can shine,
But the light of man.

The hidden beauty,
That Nature squirrels away,
Man's light makes splendid.

Praise the spelunker,
Who roots out the passages,
and gives them to us.

6 comments:

Mariposa said...

When I was in school I have more time for spelunking!

Great haiku!

Jientje said...

I missed that one!
Your words make it complete. Perfect.

The Things We Carried said...

Art mixed with poetry and words? perfect!

Silver said...

The poetry is wonderful. Love the pics you have posted too.

~Silver

Zee said...

Very nice work..simple words with great meaning. I am following you! and I welcome you to my blog!

P.S the pictures are lovely!

Mariana Soffer said...

Great text, I liked it a lot. Here are some extra lines for your post

hidden between mountains,

caves

inscribed on the wall

on the stone,

among animals and barefoot

hunters.

Hope you like it, nice blog by the way
M